By Bao Jinlong(鮑金龍)
專家點評:演講開頭點題，直截了當，緊扣主題，語言較簡潔，運用修辭得體。
It is easy to describe success in terms of money, fame and reputation. But I believe that success is not external. I believe that success comes from within. My definition of success is to be true to yourself, and be true to others. That means, that you must cherish your personal ideal even in the face of adversity. I also believe that success is not discriminatory. Success is not restricted to such a CLASS of people, in fact, it may be achieved by any person irrespective of his race, creed, gender and economic background. A good example of success is that of Beethoven. He is one of the world's most famous composers, yet he was deaf. He could not hear the majestic pieces of music that he created. Yet, in the face of this adversity, he was able to maintain his ideals--that of composing music.
To exemplify what success means to me, I pose a question to all of you. What brings us together here today? I believe that it is the beauty of the spoken word. The effect of pause and the sound of rhetoric are unique to the spoken word. I believe the beauty of the spoken word is even stronger for those who have difficulty in expressing themselves. These people are reclusive and had their emotions hidden within them. I once went to Australia and I saw two pictures, Once was drawn by a normal child, the other was drawn by a child with social inhibitions. The picture drawn by the normal child was simple and plain. The other was life-like, full of details and imagination. What this shows is that these are ideas, emotions and feelings that are locked internally in these
children.
My ideal is to be the key, spreading the beauty of the spoken words to these children. These children have been neglected, but I feel that I can and should help these children to find themselves and be able to express themselves.
I realize that this is a difficult task, and there are many obstacles on the way. But I believe in my ideals and I will stick to them--even in the face of adversity. We should never have a premature abortion of ideals--let the child, let our ideals, stand the challenge. For a life without ideals is not living.
Thank you!
譯文:成功之我見
用金錢、名譽和聲望來描述成功，這很簡單。但我相信成功不是外在的，我相信成功來源於自身。我對成功的定義是對已誠實，待人真誠。這就意味着即使面臨困境厄運，你都必須堅守自己的理想。我同樣相信成功沒有偏見，成功不屬於某一類人，事實上，不論種族、宗教信仰、性別和經濟背景，任何人都能夠獲得。貝多芬的成功就是個很好的例子。他是世界上最著名的作曲家之一，而他卻雙耳失聰。他無法聽到自己創作出的美妙樂章。然而，身
想象。這表明這些孩子的思想、情緒和感受都封閉在他們的內心深處。
我的理想是成為向這些孩子傳播話語世界美好的鑰匙。這些孩子曾被我們忽視，但我覺得我能夠也應該幫助他們發現和認識自己，並且能夠表達自己的想法。
我知道這是個艱鉅的任務，實現起來會遇到許多困難和障礙。但我篤信自己的理想，並將堅守下去——即使逆境重重。我們千萬不能對一個理想作出不成熟的棄絕決定——讓這些孩子，讓我們的理想經受挑戰。因為，沒有理想的生活是沒有生氣的。
謝謝!